On Saturday, October 22, Chicago Cubs fans were celebrating due to the Cubs advancing because it had been about 71 years since their last appearance in the World Series, making it very important to their fans. According to WGNtv.com, it states "Overjoyed fans streamed out of Wrigley Field on Saturday night after the Cubs beat the Los Angeles Dodgers in Game 6 of the NL Championship Series to earn their first trip to the World Series since 1945. Many people were wearing Cubbie blue and holding “W” flags." This tells us the excitement of the stadium's crowd exiting the stadium.
1907 and 1908 were the only years that the Cubs won the World Series which is about 108-109 years ago. This would explain why thousands of people were roaring with contentment. The Cubs' next opponent are the Cleveland Indians and will face on October 25. If the Cubs were to win in 2016, many cities and towns (that are fans of the Chicago Cubs) would surely be celebrating that moment for months.
You need to show what you want the readier to know. Like you need to explain why you made this blog. Also you need to Improve the topic you want to talk about more. Also i think you should have showed how the players felt after the game. ANd you need to put what you write in order.
ReplyDeleteI think yiou introduced your story good. But i think you should have created a problem you seen or watched at the game. You used proper nouns for some common nouns like What in the middle of a sentence. Also you need to fix some of your spelling errors in your paragraph. Some words you use, you need to make sure there used in the right way such as" The Chicag Cubs antecedent into the world series since 1945." That doesn't make sense and makes the word look awkward there. Like It doesn't belong. Some words you need to use the correct punctuation and put commas where there supposed to be.
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